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'I WANT A MESSAGE!' YOU CAN'T HANDLE A MESSAGE!!
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Finish this! I like it. You just need to finish it. I voted 5 even though it's not finished... but that's insentive for you to actually finish this thing. Please?
Only 5 stars because it's not finished... I know I'm beating it into you... but you really should complete this and submit it.
Author's Response:
true true i guess i can put that larger film to the side for a while and finish this one up i just did want this toon to be rushed
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I do believe that I need some psychiatric help. During that entire thing I just wanted sing "Fuck a Dog".... but NOOOO.... you had to have the guitar intro loop. I loved it anyway.
5
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LIE! This can't be your first.
Looks good... And I definately saw the "Boy named Sue" coming... haha! Nice.
Author's Response:
no it was def. my first try at animation, and i only hope to improve.
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Haha... At first I thought this would TOTALLY suck because
1. It was only about 300 or so kb
2. You had poorly drawn the very start.
3. The voiceover was terrible during the title...
Thanks for the pleasant surprise! All my 5 are belong to this!
10's all around!
Idk... I liked it.... I'm not sure about anyone else though.
Author's Response:
Lol, thats me, im unpredictable, im glad you thought it was ok at the end =)
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It was alright... but I must point out... there were a few flaws in the sound. Either get one of those fuzzy things for your microphone... or get a new microphone OR try not to exhale while speaking... it's hard... I know... I usually have a microphone holder and hold up panty hoes (sp?) that are streched over a hanger. There's many different solutions to that problem.
The accent however... I found that it went from Scottish in the beginning and gradually turned British. Also, the voice was a little nasally as if you were clamp your nose or you had a cold.
Overall.... It was a good peice... the mouth graphics could use a little work. I liked it though.
Sorry that this is so long. Not a whole lot more to read... don't worry.
Keep up the good work. I hope to see some improvements in the next one.
Author's Response:
"It was alright... but I must point out... there were a few flaws in the sound."
That's funny, because if I left the sound compression to as it was, it would've sounded all static-y and terrible.
"Either get one of those fuzzy things for your microphone... or get a new microphone"
My microphone isn't terrible, it's just the on and off switch is a bit broken. However, a far better microphone would be nice. :)
For trying not to exhale, I do try my best, but I'm just lazy to do so many takes, especially if I try to do high pitch voices for characters such as Graham. However, I shall consider your suggestion about trying not to exhale while speaking.
"The accent however... I found that it went from Scottish in the beginning and gradually turned British."
That's my normal voice.
"Overall.... It was a good peice"
Thanks. :)
"the mouth graphics could use a little work."
True. Sometime, I will use better mouth graphics, just not yet.
"Sorry that this is so long."
Nah, it's alright. I like reading long reviews, it's a lot better and more fun reading than the boring one line reviews where I can only say little to the user.
"I hope to see some improvements in the next one."
Perhaps not the next flash, but in the near future, there should be improvement on a few things such as myself using a drawn version of Bahamut. :)
Thanks for that good review.
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This is one of the creepiest things I've seen. The style reminds me very much of Saladfingers... I haven't seen those toons in so long... The flashing messages also gave it a subliminal feel. Good work!
Thanks for the free protection point.
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I really liked this! I loved the animation style... (shitty yet beautiful). This series has great potential. I can't wait for the next one!
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I liked it a lot. I could see myself playing this game for hours and hours without blinking once. Three years of work payed off for you! Good work! 5/5
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"i see... i assume u saw the actual video they made"
Jack and Kyle DID make a video of this song already. Judging by your animation u saw it as well... or it was just dumb luck that the video was similar... either way.... great fucking job! 5/5
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but it needs a story line of some sort.... or elaborate onb it like make that the beginning of like a series or something cool... good work 4/5
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